Magic

Magic

A Poem by Noa
"

I found this picture through Tumblr and a wild muse appeared. I don't know who took this picture; if anyone does, please tell me so that I can give proper credit.

"
The hall was filled,
with nothing but reflections;
A temple built of mirrors,
breaking all light.
Windows of water,
flooding with color,
what once was white marble;
brightened at sight.
The glass reached up taller than
perception could confirm,
forming arches beyond earth,
awe induced by fear- and
if there was a place to find it,
if there was a way to hide it:
Magic could live nowhere else
but here.

© 2011 Noa


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Lovey imagery! You really have painted a picture in my mind that will stay! You don't need the picture at the end, you've already given it with your words. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing picture, and memorable poem. You captured this so well. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. your words build up like the mirrored temple itself with the topper of the short ending line. You do magic justice.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. So vivid :) I loved this... makes the place seem so magical. Lovely write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love noticing magic in everyday happenings. Nice one!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

excellent write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful picture and beautiful words based off of it! excellent job, your writing flowed very nicely and your descriptions were vivid. last line especially was a nice touch. :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, truly beautiful.
Great write and amazing picture, you captured it so magnificently.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem! And that picture is stunning! I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I absolutely LOVE this poem. Subscribed. This was awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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