Pain

A poem by Nix and TS Ulmus!!

Agonizing, hair-yanking, 

too many tears

shoot yourself just to stop the

Pain

The pain that seeps through the cracks in my heart

Insanity dances inside my head

A mosh pit of madness

 tearing me apart

While the music rages on

I sit with my head in my hands saying:

 “I f*****g love you”

And what do I get?

Piles of nothing and pain

I swear I meant what I said

I guess you just...forgot

But I guess it’s my fault

For believing the lies you brought

Author's Note

Ts Ulmus helped me with this poem!! :)) (Pretty sure I spelled your name right this time)
This is our what? Sixth poem? We've made so many "CO-llabs" (I spelled it the way you say it) I've honestly lost count of how many we've made!!!
But of course, I love working with you and making poems with you, Ts!!

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Very raw emotion pouring out of this poem. You can feel the struggling of wondering what you did wrong and the need to get closure. You two did a very nice job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poem my dear friend. You could feel the struggle and the need. You two did well. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Paul Bell]

The love game, a minefield of pain and betrayal.
Yet it's a journey you go through to grow which is even stranger.

[wordman]

sometimes we must endure the pain for loves game

[Spamalot]

*For believing the lies you brought*

Damn, I'm sorry. But wait...... You're not my ex are you? So when did I lie to you?

If this guy is the a*****e you say he is, why are you wasting time complaining? Move on. And If you want the readers to pity you, print his letter, too to you so we can see who's at fault.

In the end: stop telling the reader how bad you feel. They don't know you so they don't care. Don't tell people you hurt. Make them hurt. Then they care.

[poetgurl]

very intense, i feel the emotions pour out. Great write you two

[Nix is typing...]

Thanks, Kari!!
I appreciate the read and review and you liking our collab!!!! :)