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Triolet: a poem of eight lines ABaAabAB (the first line recurs as the fourth and seventh and the second as the eighth.) Punctuation can vary between all lines. A very uncommon type of poem

Caught in worlds of black and white,

Nowhere to be found.

Trying hard to win this fight,

Caught in worlds of black and white,

Illumined just by xenon light.

Endless vacuum kill the sound.

Caught in worlds of black and white,

Nowhere to be found.

Author's Note

Triolet:
a poem of eight lines
ABaAabAB (the first line recurs as the fourth and seventh and the second as the eighth.)
Punctuation can vary between all lines. A very uncommon type of poem

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Good effort with a tricky format - loved the wordplay and stanza flow - a stark observational theme, but I found it an intriguing to read! and - they say a photograph (or picture) says a thousand words! Well done … :-)

[Maureen V. Hanover]

Thank you! I wrote it on the fly at a young author's conference a few years ago and I decided I liked the format. It's nice to know it's still impressionable!