That's When I Knew

Written for the "Short and Sweet" contest where by you can only write one scentence.

 

You walked away without looking back and it’s then that I knew that I loved you.

 

Author's Note

This isn't really something I'd expect a review for, was added for an entry for the 'short and sweet' writing contest. :)

Reviews

[Autumn Twilight]

As short as it was, it had a lot of meaning and emotion to it. I'm practically head over heels for your writing anyway so it doesn't surprise me that a one liner could snag me. A line so short and simple but absolute truth. Kudos!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

You mightn't have expected reviews, but you've nailed down a truth here. I have noticed that women seem to want the men that they cannot have. Be it because they cannot be tamed, or are just too famous and inaccessible, so no interest in her or they are married, these seem to be the men that they want.

[Big ol' Kahuna]

This sentence really makes one think, and I like that. Was there a lonely and longing feeling? A feeling of confidence? That feeling that I hate to see you go, but I love to watch you leave? :)

Good job Nixie.

[Twilight]

This sentence speaks a lot to the reader, Nix. I agree with the comments made by other reviewers about this elegant write. And yes, it's "short and sweet"! What more is there to say?

[Poets Soul]

Could be a closing, could be a starting line, and yes it can stand alone. Good luck on the contest. ty PS

[Gary H]

that's a neat sentence, makes the reader think and imagine a likely scene. also we're all left wanting more - as the author is!

[Shadow Writer]

A lot said in just a few words. It would be a great opening or closing line for a poem. Phantom.....

[Kelley]

Well that was short but maybe not so sweet? He walked away....sounds kind of sad.
I loved still!
Thanks for sharing.
Nik's

Kelley