Don't Let Go...

A collab with T.S. Ulmus and Nix :) "The Notebook" inspired my part of this writing.

Keep me in your clutches,

Kiss me and hold me tight forever.

Let me sup upon the marrow of your soul.

I want to be your next endeavor

Your pleasure is my greatest goal

We can rhyme and chill and do whatever

Never let me go, even if I pull away 

Take me close and make me stay

Hold me hostage to your might

even if I struggle to go

Even if I fight

My pillow is your shoulder

And thus our love will smolder

Keep me in your clutches and hold me forever.

I want what it takes to be your next endeavor

We can rhyme sublime till the end of time

Don't let me go when I pull away  

Take me close and make me stay

Hold me hostage to your might, even if I struggle

Even if I fight

My pillow is your shoulder

And thus our love will smolder

I swear I love you, that might be a little hard to perceive

It can seem like I might want to leave

Don't let me

Don't set me free

I wanna stay with you, but my mind is starting to fade

Sometimes you’re just a stranger, I don’t see what you've displayed

I fell in love with you when we were young

But now when you hold me in your clutches, I get unstrung

I want to love you, I wanna remember our dance

I wish I could rekindle our romance

I wanna remember

you read my diary to me every day

But I can’t recall how we used to play

Hold me close, baby, please!
Make me remember all these memories!!!

I felt you love me every day when we were young

A static bell in my head

 needs to be rung

I wish to remember the love we had together, baby

And maybe one last dance

Will be our chance, spark back the romance

Make me remember

Make me remember…

Author's Note

"The Notebook" inspired my section of this writing. Ts gave me a seed for this poem, but then I kinda ventured off onto the poem you see here, and he added his genius to it. :)
Let us know your thoughts! :)

Reviews

[just_a_nobody]

I love it so much. The feeling of missing someone is hard to get through sometimes. I missed someone so much that when I saw them again I told them everything. Only to found out that they never cared. Emotions are powerful. Thanks for your beautiful writing.

[Tricessimus]

I remember... Do you remember every last word to the "I love you" song? Yeah yeah, I do.

[Tricessimus]

Sounds like someone is in a boat very distant from shore. The port is waiting with warmth and love but sometimes it's hard to paddle against the currents. A stonework edifice, it will always remain, you only need to reach it. Reap the sour dew of a flowered hue in lieu of skewed horizons. Docs me once, shame on you, docs me twice, the pleasure could be twice.

[Davidgeo]

Sometimes, you must release.

[Mantequilla]

This is an amazing poem. It made me go back a few years when I lost a friend and never would see him again. I just never thought about it again until now.

[Unspoken poet]

I really like this write, loved that movie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"We can rhyme and chill and do whatever"---that is the best kind of collaboration.
and I like the idea of "my pillow is your shoulder"---
this has high temperature...and as usual with you two, sounds like one voice.

[Robert Trakofler]

just wonderful expressions in this so very raw and true treatise of love and need what a great collab it is often so hard for me to realize the ageless nature of your youthful heart so very a wise old soul

[littlekinglord]

I really really really liked it, I did tbh start crying from this because it reminds of something that i lost and might not get back. When you lose someone close to you by getting shot in front of you, I ignored that street, the place it happened, family gatherings,ands school. They were really close to me and I will never forget my friend because he saved my life and the lives of others that day.