Silence

It was raining...raining hard...
the raindrops falling heavily on my glass window...
i could'nt see the world outside...
everything was blurred beyond my window....

 

It felt like this rain has the same rhythm...
The rhythm of my hurt heart...
With the rain...all the emotions i had kept for my own...
Started flowing out...
but even then...everything around me was silent...
except the pouring showers....

 

i felt the eering silence around me...
surprisingly... it was soothing...
it was not the same killing silence...
it was not the same silence that questioned my existence...
today...suddenly i knew, i had a purpose...

 

the rain stopped...
the water drops started falling...
leaving long trails on the misty window...
the scenes outside are more clear now....
 i could see the rain washed leaves, scattering the sunlight...
creating rainbows.....

 

i am seeing the world in this new light....
the feeling that i have now is new...
its strange...nd i'm happy...

 

Reviews

[Collyn]

This is beautiful! Just a couple spelling and grammar errors:
cudnt should be couldn't
rythm should be rhythm
the eering silence should be changed because eering isn't a word
nd should be and
other than that, beautifully written and very interesting!

[Nive]

Thanks for the review:)