Can You Believe

A heartfelt story of hope and greatness.

Can you believe

The new day shines

Over the mist

That fades in time

 

When we receive

Our long sought dreams

Our roads will pass

The winding stream

 

With worlds apart

And valleys high

The rivers flow

The clouds fly by

 

Can you believe

I wrote a prose

That's got no jokes

A serious poem

 

Can you believe

I make four poems

I made em up

As I goed

 

 

Author's Note

Look for the sequel, "Ya Gotta Believe Me".

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing...:)...........................

[Tess]

this poem is great! i love the descriptions and happiness. I could read it 100 times again!

[Nitoh S]

thanksamillion

[Tess]

this poem is great with the amazing descriptions and happy feel. i could read it 100 times again.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the poem, and the clarity of your voice. ( I come from Crystal Palace, now live in Germany)

[Nitoh S]

hahaha, thanks. how's the weather?