Auden

Auden

A Poem by Nitesh Mahabal

What defines friendship?
Time or deed?
Perhaps having someone,
In times of need,

The depth of a connection,
The magic of a well wisher,
Guarding your secrets,
Helping you fight fears,

Like the deep ocean,
Is your presence,
Both calm and strong,
In all essence,

And when the sun sets,
May it be a beautiful scene,
Looking at our time together,
Fulfilling every dreams,

Hoping we age together,
With our stories intertwined,
Getting better as we go,
Like a barreled wine,

Thanking you from the bottom,
For all your efforts and time,
Dear o dear friend,
Wishing you a happy valentine 😁

© 2021 Nitesh Mahabal


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beautiful write thanks for sharing with me great flow keep up the good work

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is so beautiful and simple. A direct sentiment straight to the heart of the person receiving it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Friendship. Two people, who are there for the other, when needed.
"Hoping we age together,
With our stories intertwined,
Getting better as we go,
Like a barreled wine,"
I did like the above lines. Thank you Nitesh for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


My impression is that this relationship goes deeper than friendship. Has more the sound of soulmates, people who have found each other and plan to take it to the duration. Auden would have understood it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is most appropriate for Valentine's Day or any day to encourage and remember a friend. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on February 10, 2021
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Nitesh Mahabal
Nitesh Mahabal

Mumbai, Asia Pacific, India



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