No, I Wont Be There

U'll Understand when u read this

When ur happiness will have no bound,

You feel like talking endlessly,

The world around you will be high,

and ull be standing above them

 

Your eyes will search for me,

but no, i wont be there 

When ur mood will swing to sad,

Questions on ur mind wont end,

Life will be hell & ull be its prisoner,

u will need someone to rise u

Your eyes will search for me,

but no, i wont be there 

When u feel like sharing a secret,

Gossip about ur friends new relationship,

Cry leaning on someone's strong shoulder,

And u feel like ur lost somewhere

Your eyes will search for me,

but no, i wont be there 

Reviews

[Abbey Holt Voigt]

So hauntingly beautiful, a feeling we've all experienced. Keep writing, my friend.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thank You So Much For Your Kind Review Maam (:

[SweeTLoU]

Thats real relatable bro it has a feeling of closure to it that i like...good piece

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Thats Really Encouraging. Thanks For Stopping By And Your Kind Review

[SweeTLoU]

No problem bud i always try to check out a few peoples writing when i get on here to write

[AprilRN1210]

This is such a moving and emotional write, but with the abbreviations, it takes away some of that sincerity, the depth of feeling.. it is a little distracting as well.. the flow would have been really nice had I not been stumbling over working out the abbreviated words.. I strongly suggest writing you, your, you'll, etc out.. I think it will take this piece from being "ok" to really good..

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Point Noted. Thank U so Mch

[Delmar Cooper]

i reely c ur a gret riter & ull b famos 1 day

[Nitesh Mahabal]

That made my day. But i still hav lot to learn from so many blessed people over here. Thank u so mch fr ur review sir

[Pryde Foltz]

Your eyes will search for me,
but no, i wont be there

A very touching and relatable write. We do tend to put a lot of expectations on our friendships … best to cherish them while they exist and wish the friend the best when the friendship diminishes. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

That will be an honour fr me. Thank u so mch maam

[Matching Socks]

Very relatable Nitesh, too often we take people for granted and assume they will always be there for us.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Writers Biggest Prize if ppl cn relate to their work. Thank U Maam

[Matching Socks]

You are welcome.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hmmmmmmmmmm... :)

[Tasfia Islam]

its aweeeeeeeessssooooommmmmmmeeeeeee........ toooooo good....great work done.

[Nitesh Mahabal]

M glad u liked it maam