True love ❤

A sad story when a guy moves on and start loving someone else . But the girl is still missing him because she realised it was true love ♡

All is left is to cry,
Aftr realising you never bothered to make a try.

Waiting for you to hug me tight ,
Was the only thing on my mind every night.

I don't know what I did to deserve this pain,
Atleast you finally have what you wanted to gain.

I tried to everything to overcome you,
Bt then I knew this love for you was very true.

I ask myself what made you forget those memories,
And make them fake stories.

Now we are departed,
You left me broken hearted.�'"

Author's Note

Please leave your suggestions. 😊

Reviews

[avant security guard]

hey, N.
run a spell check, please
do yourself a favor

the intro is important
that the girl thinks it was true love
but he has moved on to another female
I'd recommend including this in the poem itself
or, keep the intro, if you want to try to publish this--
and yes, publish your poems
try "Thorny Locust"
true love is ALWAYS important
I like your architect ambition
since, surely, a poet has to pay bills

[Nishtha]

Oh Thankyou so much Sir. Your recommendation means a lot. And I will try to keep the intro and bring something good.

[Nishtha]

And sir, I request you to go through the other poem *was it really love?* once. It has a intro. I hope you'll like it.

[Dash the Reaper]

Nicely written,,but i feel like u need to put more imagery in your work but otherwise you are in the right direction

[Nishtha]

I'll try to put more imaginary next time. Thankyou for the suggestion. 😊

[Lyndy]

Nice poem, I enjoyed it! :D

[Nishtha]

Thank you so much 😊

[shirish tiwari]

good one still i feel something was missing.

[Nishtha]

Sir I'll try to work better. Do suggest me about that missing element in the poem if you can. Thankyou ! 😊

[shirish tiwari]

Nishtha... i again gone through the whole thing. this is nicely done no changes needed to this. but like to have one more poem on same thing with more pain and feelings. good luck and will be waiting for the next part. please don't call sir.. still a student trying to learn a lot from you.

[Nishtha]

Oh okay thanks 😊 I'll try to do something better.