Was it really love ?

Teen love ♡

I walked in the mall with my friends,
All were familiar except one at the end.
We shared the table without knowing each others name,
And end up asking stupid questions quite insane.
We saw each other at the school top but neva talked,
And blushed weneva you across me walked.
One fine day before the test,
You came and tried to b your best.
You had a rose and said I love you,
Bt I knew it all before it was realised by you.
Should I say yes or reject?,
Coz I loved you bt was hard to accept.
I couldn't say no coz you were sweet,
and your presence increased my heartbeat.
Everything between us was now fine,
Coz finally now you were mine.
Six months went so far,
Bt now insecurities were at power.
Lovey Dovey things between us went bad,
Coz of the stubborness you had.
You wanted me to sacrifice everything for you,
I did coz I was madly in love with you.
Finally I decided to be apart,
Coz I couldn't take anymore it hurted my heart.
And aftr some months you again proposed me,
This time I said no coz your demand couldn't b fulfilled completely.
It was very hard for me to say you no,
Bt I had to coz I had no option so.
You are the person on my mind day and night,
When I think of you all feels so right.
I still get chills whenever I see your name,
It's all those lovey Dovey memories I would blame.
Every now and den my heart wanders back in time,
And all those feelings awake memories in my mind❤

Author's Note

Thankyou for reviews. 😊
This will help me to do better.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and sad story told in the poem.
"I did coz I was madly in love with you.
Finally I decided to be apart,
Coz I couldn't take anymore it hurted my heart. "
Sometime we need to listen to our mind. Somethings cannot be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nishtha]

Thankyou so much sir. I'm glad to see your comment here. I have recently started writing and I'm sure these reviews will motivate me to do something better. 😊

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome.

[Nishtha]

Thankyou 😊

[avant security guard]

I like the "lovey dovey" stuff
you could even title the poem that
again, your spelling is way off
you owe it to yourself to fix it

I was thinking about writing a song the other day
songs usually rhyme
so, I'd suggest you try to put music to this poem

excellent work

[Nishtha]

I'll try to put music soon 😊 Thankyou Sir for appreciating it.

[samparks,sam]

that nice I like your poem be continue in my mail

[Nishtha]

Oh Thankyou so much sir. Glad to see your reviews here.

[samparks,sam]

at last you success say your feeling be continued and try do more after read my poem

[Nishtha]

Sure sir. 😊 Thankyou for taking out time and reading this.