Chapter 1 "What the heck?!"

Chapter 1 "What the heck?!"

A Chapter by Nish...

"Are you sure you didn't forget anything?" mom asked, in her usual anxious tone.
"Yes mommy, Don't ya' worry, I took everything I need. You checked my bags just half an hour ago, remember?" was my calm answer.
"Oh yes, I did, did't I? Well, did you take your water bottle? And those extra pair of glasses? And th..."
"Ma! Calm down!" I stopped her, "Don't be so worried, after all, I'm YOUR daughter, I know how to take care of myself;" I added with a cunning smile.
"Now that's what I'm worried about..." mom mumbled.
"Oh c'mon mommy dear, let's go and have a cup of coffee. My flight's delayed for at least an hour, so it won't be a problem. Look, dad's waving at us." I said, as I started pushing mom towards a cafe situated in the middle of the airport. I could not help but wonder how can there be a cafe like this out of nowhere just in the middle of the airport? And why were there no other customers except the few of us?  But eventually I put the thought aside as I tried to enjoy the least amount of family time I could get before I fly off to a completely unknown place. Just the mere thought of it made my body tingle with excitement. But unfortunately that feeling could not last for longer as a mike announcement, almost out of nowhere, declared that the plane for San-Francisco was going to depart in ten minutes. I, along with my family, jumped to our feet and gave each other terrified looks.
"That's odd," I whispered to myself while thinking how in the world could one hour pass within a moment. I ran towards the departure door and on its way, picked up my luggage. Before getting out I took a glimpse of my family , my mom, my dad and my younger sister along with the others standing with tearful eyes. I waved at them and exited through the door.
"What the . . . " I was out of words. There was a huge ship standing in front of my bewildered eyes. A SHIP!
"Wait, isn't this supposed to be an aeroplane? And how the hell could a ship be standing on an airport's runway?! Why am I seeing this? Am I drunk or something?" All sorts of crazy thoughts and questions started swirling in my head.
"Wait a second, this possibly couldn't be . . . . . A DREAM!
THUD!!
"S**t!" I cursed at myself as I felt tinges of pain through my body. I had rolled over my bed and fell on the cold ground.
"Wow. What a great way to start my day." I murmured sarcastically as I rubbed my back.


© 2011 Nish...


Author's Note

Nish...
The real story's gonna continue from the next chapters. What do you think? Should I continue?

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I am curious to know what this girl's dream is. I liked it except for the swearing. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was a great intro! You should certainly continue with the story. :)

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Wow. What a great way to start my day."
yes, also a great way to start a novel.
Nicely written.
I think you "should continue".

Posted 12 Years Ago


hehehe... 'c'mon, mommy dear.'
lols. Well, it would be creepy if the dream had came true... wouldn't it.. :)
nice, and hahaha something my mind would have thought up of in the back of my head(i mean about the dream. my mind is weird -.- I had this epic sword fight with this dude... but then i realized i had a gun.... then the dude turned into a sword fish...) lol. please continue :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha. An interesting start, but the title spoiled some of the fun! But still, this one's pretty good. You introduced the characters partially in a unique way. Great chapter. Looking forward for more. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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