QUEST OF LIFE

this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily

life is a cozy bed

then why am I always sad?

have I gone mad

or simply just trapped.

I don't know where to head 

when it has no trough or crest.

sometimes I do this, sometimes I do that

am I a cat or a rat?

to quest it out, I have sat

is it  a misconcept or a fact?

one day I met two princeton

one was sodium and other was krypton

the former showed me the bright new dawn

unfortunately I couldn't grasp it on

later I realised the tone

and my life rocked on..!! 

 

I know you too are in a trauma 

wondering about the life drama

the lesson is not to ponder

but to enjoy the wonder

because life is a cozy bed

& you always have to step ahead. 

Author's Note

Hey guys! sorry for ur inconvenience in reading the poem , so to rectify my mistake here is the explanation to the poem.
1. Life is such a warm and comfortable bed then why i am not happy ?.Has something gone wrong with me or i have been trapped in this puzzling life. I don't know what to do next when this life neither has a start (trough) nor an end(crest).
2.In this life race I am confused about my job,positions etc and then i compare myself with a cat or a rat that is question myself whether i am dominating and doing what i wish to do or just being carried away by the outside world. So, finally i have sat to analyse the situation and to find out if it happens to me only.
3.The day,when i had a dialogue with the almighty Lord brought a turning point in me He introduced me to the two different souls of mine that is sodium(reactive) and krypton(non reactive). The reactive soul taught me (krypton) the art to live, but being narrow minded I couldn't get the point but later when i gave it a deep thought i came across the real scenario of life.
As you already know , the motto of last stanza is to introduce the readers with the correct way of leading a life.

Reviews

[nathan]

I will be honest with you. The idea behind this piece is deep but I found that as I read along it started becoming tedious ergo my advice would be to work on it some more and cut out some unnecessary wording.
All in all i liked it. Keep the fire burning

[sharonlee]

One step at a time eventually gets us somewhere....

[Caleu Andrade]

I liked this one, well done.

[Sarah Hale]

I found myself relating quite a bit to that last stanza. You're very creative and it was an enjoyable read. Thank you.

[nathan]

hey don't apologize, we're all here to learn i.e. apart from self expression. I like this new version, short and sweet, that's all I'll say

[Gandré]

thanks for reading my poem; you always "choose to step ahead" .))

[Carrie Manor]

I really like this philosophical poem! The messages you portrayed are correct for many of us. If, indeed,' life is a cozy bed', well then why can't we be all content?? (:

[Muse]

A note to readers is always good my friend, if you think the writing in itself might make them scratch at there heads. I challenge you to take the advice still. Don't be scared of constructive criticism..........I've had plenty of it thrown at me, and have become a better writer because of it. :)

[Thea]

Very well said...This is really a great poem... :)))
Like what it conveys!

Btw, thanks for the review... :)))

[Nishant Gupta]

hey friends we are little ones with deep feelings wanting to enjoy the life by sharing it with u guys..!!:P:P:P