QUEST OF LIFE

this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily

life is a cozy bed

then why am I always sad?

have I gone mad

or simply just trapped.

I don't know where to head 

when it has no trough or crest.

sometimes I do this, sometimes I do that

am I a cat or a rat?

to quest it out, I have sat

is it  a misconcept or a fact?

one day I met two princeton

one was sodium and other was krypton

the former showed me the bright new dawn

unfortunately I couldn't grasp it on

later I realised the tone

and my life rocked on..!! 

 

I know you too are in a trauma 

wondering about the life drama

the lesson is not to ponder

but to enjoy the wonder

because life is a cozy bed

& you always have to step ahead. 

Author's Note

Hey guys! sorry for ur inconvenience in reading the poem , so to rectify my mistake here is the explanation to the poem.
1. Life is such a warm and comfortable bed then why i am not happy ?.Has something gone wrong with me or i have been trapped in this puzzling life. I don't know what to do next when this life neither has a start (trough) nor an end(crest).
2.In this life race I am confused about my job,positions etc and then i compare myself with a cat or a rat that is question myself whether i am dominating and doing what i wish to do or just being carried away by the outside world. So, finally i have sat to analyse the situation and to find out if it happens to me only.
3.The day,when i had a dialogue with the almighty Lord brought a turning point in me He introduced me to the two different souls of mine that is sodium(reactive) and krypton(non reactive). The reactive soul taught me (krypton) the art to live, but being narrow minded I couldn't get the point but later when i gave it a deep thought i came across the real scenario of life.
As you already know , the motto of last stanza is to introduce the readers with the correct way of leading a life.

Reviews

[nathan]

I will be honest with you. The idea behind this piece is deep but I found that as I read along it started becoming tedious ergo my advice would be to work on it some more and cut out some unnecessary wording.
All in all i liked it. Keep the fire burning

[The Analog Kid]

This has an encouraging feel to it. Very unique and spiritual!

[Shy Girl]

I liked your poem. The truth behind and inbetween the lines and words, speaks volumes of their own. It was a nice piece. Thank you for sharing... :)

[stars are far]

this was nice great piece
keep that up :)

[Darkness11]

this has a very positive tone to it, especially at the end! well done and nicely written!

[sivan]

the idea is a good one... needs a little work but positive message is sent through boastful simplicity

[Richard McLin]

This piece is fantastic.

[CrushedPepperMinTCHrist..]

awesome poem :) yeah, life is cozy bed and I love to sleep in cozy bed......
:)

[Russell]

nice. a little rough, but get's the point across unabahedly.

[Michael Knoll]

I agree with Nathan and I would add that I found the third stanza just confusing and sort of unnecessary. Good efforts though! Keep it up!

[penless writer]

Interesting piece