QUEST OF LIFE

this is about how one neglects his life ,pondering about this precious gift of nature unnecessarily

life is a cozy bed

then why am I always sad?

have I gone mad

or simply just trapped.

I don't know where to head 

when it has no trough or crest.

sometimes I do this, sometimes I do that

am I a cat or a rat?

to quest it out, I have sat

is it  a misconcept or a fact?

one day I met two princeton

one was sodium and other was krypton

the former showed me the bright new dawn

unfortunately I couldn't grasp it on

later I realised the tone

and my life rocked on..!! 

 

I know you too are in a trauma 

wondering about the life drama

the lesson is not to ponder

but to enjoy the wonder

because life is a cozy bed

& you always have to step ahead. 

Author's Note

Hey guys! sorry for ur inconvenience in reading the poem , so to rectify my mistake here is the explanation to the poem.
1. Life is such a warm and comfortable bed then why i am not happy ?.Has something gone wrong with me or i have been trapped in this puzzling life. I don't know what to do next when this life neither has a start (trough) nor an end(crest).
2.In this life race I am confused about my job,positions etc and then i compare myself with a cat or a rat that is question myself whether i am dominating and doing what i wish to do or just being carried away by the outside world. So, finally i have sat to analyse the situation and to find out if it happens to me only.
3.The day,when i had a dialogue with the almighty Lord brought a turning point in me He introduced me to the two different souls of mine that is sodium(reactive) and krypton(non reactive). The reactive soul taught me (krypton) the art to live, but being narrow minded I couldn't get the point but later when i gave it a deep thought i came across the real scenario of life.
As you already know , the motto of last stanza is to introduce the readers with the correct way of leading a life.

Reviews

[nathan]

I will be honest with you. The idea behind this piece is deep but I found that as I read along it started becoming tedious ergo my advice would be to work on it some more and cut out some unnecessary wording.
All in all i liked it. Keep the fire burning

[oops sorry (not really)]

i think u need to draft it and i was a little confused, but if it came from ur heart then great

[only rob]

I found this a fun read that could use a bit of sharpening. I think the repeats of life would be less conspicuous absent the capitals. Have a groovy day.

[JadedSparrow]

Not exactly sure about this poem. While some exceptions can be made for this being your first post, some things are a bit hard to overlook. The lack of or poor punctuation really took away from the write. The capitalisation and text speech (i.e. u instead of you) also served as a distraction. While the message was great, your form left a great deal to be desired. I hope that you found this constructive and that you continue to write and improve.

JS

[K.C. Zbryk]

This poem has a very uplifting thought behind it, and is something more people should try to keep in mind. Keep writing and im sure that each piece will grow with you. Great write and i cant wait to read more!

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

I am really not sure about this poem. It jolts and stutters along and the Capitalisation doesn't help it, nor do the Exclamation marks and little faces. I see this is your first here at writerscafe Nishant? The thing about LIFE is, it's all Poetry in Emotion and if you refine your art, I think you will find your life 'Rocks' ahead in a more cosy way.

Thanks for the review of The Only Way!

Smiling at you

Tai

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Yeah, i read it. This is very good. Keep it up! God bless you!