Extent Of Negativity

Extent Of Negativity

A Poem by Nisarg Sukhadeve
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A befitting reply to critics who just love to hate us.

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I'm just fed up with the slowpokes criticizing me
Downplaying my efforts and shrilling inside my ears
Showcasing their ability of insulting the people
Who progress coz they feel they're far behind.
They should know the fact, I don't ride on luck
Whatever you all bluff, I just don't give a .... !
Look down below, there's a new one again
Criticism has knocked my door unluckily yet again
They say I write with a lot of negativity
There's no skill inside him, it's just notoriety
These bluffs compelled me to kneel down to injustice
Give up to the fear and shed a lot of tears
Couldn't gather my strength for a sec to cheer huh?
That's when I started picking up the pieces from the past
And at last, I found that the world's too fast
Couldn't afford to repeat stuff, it's so rough
I know I couldn't do anymore if I did some more
So I had to answer all my critics who just make furore.
I had to be strong and cruel to those retards
Who just love to pull people down to their own level
And laugh at us, at me, demotivating me
See he's better than you, where the hell are you?
They don't realize the potential I have
Coz that needs strength and guts they disastrously lack
I admit I was distracted in between, I wrote crap
But I recovered and got the rhythm, and you should know
That to go with the flow, to get everything blown
Right on the critics' face, takes a lot to show
The confidence I'm talking about, to defeat you all
You may never get the chance to pull the great ones down
They would march forward and will take that crown.

© 2014 Nisarg Sukhadeve


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Added on November 1, 2014
Last Updated on November 1, 2014
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Nisarg Sukhadeve
Nisarg Sukhadeve

Nagpur, India



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