Dissonance

Stop.
No, it's not discordant.
Everything's pefect.
Harmonious.
In tune.

Don't get me wrong,
I'm flattered that you even let me listen to it.
I hope it stays on your soundtrack forever.

But just stop for a minute.
Try to be anything but flawless.
Ignore your pile of endless sheet music
and let go.

I want to hear your  unstable tone combinations.
I want you to be out of tune.
All I want from you is dissonance.

You can make music out of dissonance too.

Reviews

[Crtomir]

Being always perfect in life is extremely boring... right?

[alifeacoustic]

Love the idea of the musician taking heed of your words and unleashing everything from within.Images I got from this was starting with a polished performance, tuxedo and polished performance, note perfect, appreciation rings out. Then later, the real maestro plays just for you, feeling the pulse from within escape through his fingers, reaching a crescendo of fireworks and crashing thunder, feeling truly alive in their music.
Beautiful write. I want to hear it now :)