Thanks to letter L.....Wow!!! I loved the free flow of the poem....Very truthful poetry dear poetess....Great choice of words and your style of expressing the thought is very very good....Thumbs up!!! Full rating....
It's not easy to choose three L's for life- you've convinced me that in the case of this poem's story, they are Her three L's. Good point about the word 'losing' - it literally can mean so much. I liked the last line a lot!
Your thoughts encompass such a vast landscape of life, Sara... from the gentle and beautiful to the deeply painful... So profound! I loved that you shared a glimpse into your inspiration too... it's wondrous to see what can spark an ocean of words... :)
These are some very important 'L' words and while you bring a personal examination to each of the words you have selected, it allows the reader to think about these words in our own lives. Not many of us can say music is not important and I love the line '...anyone can find their own frequency' - that is so true... and loving and losing is definitely something we can all connect with. Love the format you use, too... nicely-done, Sara
love the structure of this....Listening to music is one of the best things in life, but also listening to the heartbeat of another is so exciting...even though by loving there is a risk of losing....i still have enjoyed losing my mind over another and with another...
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you.
I agree. Losing my mind over another and with another is indeed one of the best f.. read moreThank you.
I agree. Losing my mind over another and with another is indeed one of the best feelings.