The child who was born upside-down

The child who was born upside-down

A Poem by Nirupama.H

The child who was born upside-down
Thought a frown was a smile, and a smile was a frown.
He wore on his foot, a golden crown
And he joined the circus from town to town.

© 2016 Nirupama.H


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Nirupama.H
Picture courtesy: Google Images

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This is the one i like to rate... CLASS...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

6 Years Ago

Haha! Thank you!
Had to laugh at this one. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

7 Years Ago

Haha. I'm glad you did!
Thanks again for your time :)
Omg! This is a mind blowing piece!
I loved the crazy imagery and the sad end, although I feel that you might not have intended to make it sad but rather happy for finding a place in the odd world.
Great piece!
Keep sharing your wonderful work with us!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Yes, I meant for it to be a happy ending but I'm glad you could find another interpretation and woul.. read more
This is just marvelous! You are very creative my dear. Love this one. ~Sharon

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Miss Sharon!! I'm so glad you liked it.
Miss Sharon

8 Years Ago

You are welcome my new-found fellow wordsmith!
This is a genius piece, and I love the simplicity of it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot .I'm glad you liked it.
Nice poem! Very creative and entertaining, yet it's so short! Amazing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
A very clever poem...it endears itself to me in telling me its not bad to be different. Indeed, sometimes, those who are different are happier and wear the golden crown. Very creatively written, Nirupama. Pen On!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Divya.
I'm glad you could relate with it.
This is very well done. A happy type poem. It seems there is a bigger story within the poem. But maybe not. It is a fun read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot !!
I want this poem to say that everyone has a place,even if they were born upsi.. read more
Tina Kline

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
What a fun write. I liked it a lot. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. :)
Rather bazaar, but a fun piece. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nirupama.H

8 Years Ago

Hehe. Thank you :)

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