So I Can See

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

I always leave a little Jesus behind
Because she loves the lord
But she seeks my darkness
And that's always okay.
She asks me to taste her
When I am thirsty
I always leave lights on
So I can see
How lovely
She appears

© 2018 Nipplegrinder

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Lyn Anderson

I do believe this is a little more subtle -- to me, this is where your writing shines.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Yes, I know, dear girl. However, I've salacious tastes. Makes you delve, if you wish.

CD Campbell

Hey, you can't have the light without a little darkness, right? I totally agree with the last four lines. Well penned! CD

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Thanks, brother. I appreciate that. I was suffering a bit of writer's block, prior to this, so I'm p.. read more

Ardra

The darkness and yet the light....
We keep seeking what is forbidden....
Isn't it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

6 Years Ago

Indeed, Ardra. Thank you for stopping by. :)

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Added on November 2, 2018
Last Updated on November 2, 2018

Author

Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO

About

50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..