Ashes

Ashes always tell a tale
tell a truth
That which has burned
never may lie
to the fire
certainly never cry again
That which burns
is insistent upon
revealing the moments
of its last plea

Look upon the ashes
before gales
scatter
Before rain falls
Ashes tell the truth
of
the fire

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Ashes of things loss. Can tell stories. I liked this poem. Left something for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Alexa Apothic Red]

I absolutely love this! Its depth, its truth, the imagery and great metaphorical context! As always the way you place and choose words and phrases with great detail and scrutiny is just so masterful, I'm in awe of your art!! This piece is beautifully moving and so true.

[Nipplegrinder]

Damn, Alexa. I forgot about this one. Thank you, dear for loving this.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Just getting around to reading all of you, 1 piece at a time. Haven't found anything I didn't like, thus far. You're a great writer-truly!!

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, darling girl. I'm so flattered, but proud. You write so wonderfully well. I think it's mutual admiration, by now, for sure.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

That much can be agreed upon! Great minds think alike just like dirty minds think alike, right?

[KCthelastboyscout]

I agree with the first reviewer. The ashes seem relatable to past memories.you choose your words wisely in this poem.well done

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, sir. I'm glad my words could convey the same feeling for more than one person.
That's the greatest compliment I could hope for.

[Taino]

Very well written. For me I saw the ashes as memories, a reminder of my past, the fire. As you said "before the gales scatter", for me that meant, before it's too late. I really enjoyed your poem.

[Nipplegrinder]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. Your review is spot on, as well.
Thank you.
K

[denise]

a nice rhythm and image - I like

[Nipplegrinder]

Thanks! I'm pleased you do.