Your Banquet Awaits

Morsels of mystery
Sustenance
Food for the curious
Scraps for the starved
Feast for the intrigued.

Question
upon
Question

Intensity in a parcel
packed in the smallest box
designed to traverse
a global network
of
automatons
and
usurpers

Your banquet, awaits.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh my! This. Is. Amazing!!

I like the introduction.. the essence of ravenous hunger and the nourishment there offered.. but the last stanza is actually the best! What a surprise for me as a the reader.. the idea of a hidden treasure in a package.. but it has to travel through the universe and pass through handlers and messengers to get to me... ohhhh but I just want to open that thing now!!!

Okay, okay, I can be patient.. after all this piece is all about the decadence of a slow, anticipatory build-up... so much lies there in that moment.. in fact overtures can be made on this moment, because it is a defining one. It is beautiful, and it is that quick, clever switch from slow to intense that the reader knows is coming at the conclusion of these words.

[Nipplegrinder]

You are wonderful ,Alexa. Thank you so much. I'm

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Half the pleasure is in the wait and the unknown. The breath between a kiss is a promise to be kept.

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, Linda. I'm pleased you took the time to share your thoughts. They are lovely, indeed.

[augustus]

I've got an appetite for more of the same. Thank you.

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you for taking time to comment. It is greatly appreciated.