This Is The Time I Drink Of You

**EROTICA** Contains Mature Subject Matter

The satin straps still tied to the bedposts
The silken shimmer of sunrise
Dancing on the gooseflesh
The gentle fan wafts simple breeze
Upon each curve and lock
The matted hair and
Ruined eye makeup
The faint smell of candles
Having been extinguished
The scent of leather
And surrender
And your breath's cadence
In exact rhythm
With the warbling robin
Beyond our den
This is the time I drink of you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You made the reader believe every words. Nice flow of thoughts led the reader to the perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Courtney Hough]

This paints the image very clearly in your mind! I love this! Beautiful write

[Nipplegrinder]

I truly appreciate that. Thank you for dropping by.

[Delmar Cooper]

The chef I met after a few drinks became a garrulous best bud. I too, I'm sure, was rambling on. But, he explained his theory of conflicting flavor: salt with sugar, sweet with spice, fruit and brine all terribly confusing to the uninitiated. "I can't do it with words" he said "You have to taste it yourself." By this time we couldn't drive to his restaurant so it never happened. You however can do it with words, and you did.

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, Del.

[Ardra]

beautifully painted... the morning of desire and the forgotten nights tale told very well..
the satin straps are very alluring ;)

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you, G. But the scent of surrender is my favorite allure of all. ;)

[Smoking Man]

Great imagery created from just a few stanza's.
I'm imagining the bedroom scene almost as if I'm the little robin watching on in the cool morning air.

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you! I'm pleased you enjoyed this!

[Smoking Man]

My pleasure

[Rosie Brooklin]

Beautifully written. I love the imagery; I can really see the picture that you painted with this poem. I especially love the last line. My only critique is that it is devoid of punctuation. Well done!

[Nipplegrinder]

Sorry about the lack of punctuation. Proud of the lack of punctuation.

[Gee]

Rosie is bang on. A clear image painted and steamy thoughts of what led to these images. Shows that you don't have to drop down to base level to pen really good erotica

[Nipplegrinder]

Thanks, Gee. I truly appreciate that.