My Darkness

Does my darkness fall upon you?
Cause fear, or thirst?
Does my darkness meld with yours?
Does my darkness frighten you
or embolden your curiosity?
Does my darkness manifest in your kiss?
Does my darkness gather you?
Hold you against the fire?
Rescue or test?
Does my darkness make you weak?
Does my darkness strengthen?
Does my darkness alight your dreams?

Reviews

[Smoking Man]

Brilliant piece of poetry which expresses the enduring influence of mood from one person.to another.
I have written a similar poem on my experience of darkness and the reasons for it's manifestations during my formative years.Kudos to you,I love the style of this writing and eloquent way it is written.

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you! Darkness seems to be a recurring theme in my poetry. Lol
I'll be looking for your writing.

[Smoking Man]

You're welcome,I'll publish it at some point this weekend and look forward to your review.😁

[Ardra]

Does my darkness make you weak?
Does my darkness strengthen?
Does my darkness alight your dreams?

Some may feel scared of darkness...but some feel at home...

Does my darkness frighten you
or embolden your curiosity?

nice set of questions..

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you! I'm pleased you like this!

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

Yea seems the darkness lingers around me and in my dreams lol but great read short and sweet 🤗