Consideration Of Canvas

I want Scotch and smoky
vixen voiced
women cackling and smiling
Desiring me and her
Picking which one of us
They'll have
Which one would break
Whom might fall
to the colors of an empty sky
awaiting painting
the shading and nuance required
consideration of canvas
careful calculations
simmered whispers
stolen winks
lingering grins
The glue of lust
smells of hyacinth
and spit,
of leather,
wax, and
surrender

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Smoky vixen voiced women-great line! I love that!

I love how you used the empty canvases that "awaited painting" oh so good! I love that smearing visual I get from perhaps a blood red and some black all over these bodies...

The glue of lust-wow, original and also a great precursor to the following lines: spit, leather, wax, yes I think I can see those becoming a glue of lusts...

Exquisite writing as ever!

[Nipplegrinder]

Grinning from ear to ear. Thank you, dear. Hehehe

[Alexa Apothic Red]

You are welcome! The pleasure is mine..

[Carol Cashes]

"vixen voiced women cackling and smiling" I bartended in six states for eighteen years: I know those women! Another nicely done piece.

[Nipplegrinder]

I've never been in a bar.
I'm lying.
Thank you, dear.
I'm so pleased you like it.