Kept Inside

Kept Inside

A Poem by Nipplegrinder
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**EROTICA**

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I like when wind whispers across my backsweat
though it's wind from the air conditioner as I lay upon you
buried to the hilt
my name on your lips
I like when you can't form sentences
when I know how well-spoken you are
how well-read, and educated
I like when your eyes slam shut
then fly open and roll toward the back of your brain
I like watching the sweat bead upon your upper lip
and mashing my mouth against yours to taste it
I like when you struggle to break free
Free from yourself
Free from your fears
Free
I like when your entire body quakes
as I slow my strokes
then resume even faster
I like when you squeeze your thighs against me
coaxing the last drop inside you
I like when I s l o w l y p u l l o u t o f y o u
You fight to keep me inside

© 2017 Nipplegrinder


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Okay, I prefer to be classier than to stream a bunch of expletives across the screen in their electronic glow as if they were justified.. but that's what I had to bite my lip and hold back as I neared the end of this piece.. I was on the edge of my seat.. well I guess it's the bed tonight.. waiting to read what happened next and where's the climax? I absolutely LOVED the sentiment of this... I too am guilty of fighting to keep it inside, not ready for the end.

I also loooooove the part about her being unable to articulate her pleasure but having been one to be well-spoken and educated.. and yes, you did that to her. Well done!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh, my. Yes, free.

The progression here is lovely, sets the imagination afire.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

7 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend. Always glad to know a bit of naughty stuff still sets a mind to fancy.

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Added on February 24, 2017
Last Updated on February 24, 2017
Tags: love, lust, fuck, sex, first lovemaking, beautiful memory

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Nipplegrinder
Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO



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50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..

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