Eased Into Eden

I want to be engulfed by your desire.
Enthralled by your touch.
Eased onto the bed,
and eaten like prey.
Exorcised of demons by your lustful intent.
Enraptured by your gaze,
and energized by your lips.
I want your energy to encase me,
and set me free.
I want to be enveloped by your body
and engage in carnal delight.
Enamored by your pulchritude,
and enervated by your prowess.
I want you to engender my staff,
and enslave me with your mouth.
Elucidate your intentions,
and execute them with precision.
Electrify me.
Encircle me.
Ebulliently, effectuate me to Eden.

Author's Note

An exercise in alliteration.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

OMFG-SO hot!! Waiting for my heartbeat to slow from its effervescent rising asphyxiation... I just LOVE alliteration! It's definitely that English nerd in me... but naturally as you play with similar sounding words and sounds, it creates a lulling, engulfing and inviting rhythm. There's a great purpose to literary device as many tools/devices created by man were meant to make all things better... and this is not exception! Okay, okay, you caught me, I too joined in on the "e" alliteration!! I couldn't help it! It was too fun!

Okay, now alliterate about Alexa ;) AAAAAnnnnd, go! ha ha

[Nipplegrinder]

You are, without doubt, the most, bestest, and obviously brilliant reviewers. Hehe.
But, thank you for enjoying this.
Truly.

[KWP]

Pertaining to the alliteration I am thinking the very first line should start with Engulf ??? What do you think??? I have never really played around with alliteration, well a little bit not with much conviction.

The last line of your work - ahhh - well yes, there are many paths to Eden, and some, as you have portrayed in your poem, are not the paths that most would see as a fitting journey to the garden of bliss - but why not?

Your words are easy to slide right into if the person is open and honest enough with themselves to accept the natural eroticism we all have. It's an easy slide, into that world - once you surrender.

Nice one X

[Nipplegrinder]

Perhaps you're right about the first line. Thanks for an open minded review.

[KWP]

Welcome ....

[Raghib]

cunning usage of words . a good read not only for the usage of alliteration but also because of the themes

[Poetic Beauty]

This is stimulating and love the play with word in this piece. Sultry and sizzling