Eased Into Eden

Eased Into Eden

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

I want to be engulfed by your desire.
Enthralled by your touch.
Eased onto the bed,
and eaten like prey.
Exorcised of demons by your lustful intent.
Enraptured by your gaze,
and energized by your lips.
I want your energy to encase me,
and set me free.
I want to be enveloped by your body
and engage in carnal delight.
Enamored by your pulchritude,
and enervated by your prowess.
I want you to engender my staff,
and enslave me with your mouth.
Elucidate your intentions,
and execute them with precision.
Electrify me.
Encircle me.
Ebulliently, effectuate me to Eden.

© 2017 Nipplegrinder


Author's Note

Nipplegrinder
An exercise in alliteration.

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OMFG-SO hot!! Waiting for my heartbeat to slow from its effervescent rising asphyxiation... I just LOVE alliteration! It's definitely that English nerd in me... but naturally as you play with similar sounding words and sounds, it creates a lulling, engulfing and inviting rhythm. There's a great purpose to literary device as many tools/devices created by man were meant to make all things better... and this is not exception! Okay, okay, you caught me, I too joined in on the "e" alliteration!! I couldn't help it! It was too fun!

Okay, now alliterate about Alexa ;) AAAAAnnnnd, go! ha ha

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

You are, without doubt, the most, bestest, and obviously brilliant reviewers. Hehe.
But, tha.. read more



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This is so beautiful and admittedly arousing. I especially appreciate your allusion towards Eden. Very well written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this one!! I like you choice of words and how you used them



Posted 6 Years Ago


OMFG-SO hot!! Waiting for my heartbeat to slow from its effervescent rising asphyxiation... I just LOVE alliteration! It's definitely that English nerd in me... but naturally as you play with similar sounding words and sounds, it creates a lulling, engulfing and inviting rhythm. There's a great purpose to literary device as many tools/devices created by man were meant to make all things better... and this is not exception! Okay, okay, you caught me, I too joined in on the "e" alliteration!! I couldn't help it! It was too fun!

Okay, now alliterate about Alexa ;) AAAAAnnnnd, go! ha ha

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

You are, without doubt, the most, bestest, and obviously brilliant reviewers. Hehe.
But, tha.. read more
A creative and poetic way of saying let's have great sex. ha Let's see immortal beings convey their thoughts like this. :)

Nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

Indeed, my friend. Pleased you like it.
I forgot to mention - I particularly liked these last lines:
'Electrify me.
Encircle me.
Ebulliently, effectuate me to Eden.'
Hot stuff. my friend.


Posted 6 Years Ago


This is excellent, NG. The emotional content is very powerful and the imagery is vivid. And the alliteration actually alliterates ardently!
:D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Iron Man. Ha!
Amazing use of words starting with "e" . . . an unusual pick for such a literary dalliance. Not one of your "e" words sounds contrived & they all work together to convey dynamic action and intensity! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Margie. I'm very pleased you think so.
Even the thesaurus is challenged by how you wrapped this one up.

You're an emotional masochist/vampire aren't you? (I'm really asking by the way)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

Thank you. And, no.
Very nicely written, Nipplegrinder!😳 Never thought I’d call a man that! 🤦🏾‍♂️

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Years Ago

Shhhh. Perhaps you will. Tee hee.

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Added on February 15, 2017
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Tags: love, desire, longing

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Nipplegrinder
Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO



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50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..

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