GERBIL

GERBIL

A Poem by Nini

Sometimes I feel like a gerbil
running around and around on his wheel!

I'm a fearful little gerbil,
never wanting to leave the predictable spinning of the wheel,
but longing to jump off at the same time.
Always anxious to try something new

So tired of the smell of flatulence
that life so often gives you in the down wind

Always in need of a massage
and a good ride on a carousel

If none of this is making any sense to you...
well, join the club.
It doesn't make any sense to me either!

© 2015 Nini


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At times we are all gerbils but jump Nini, jump, you will enjoy where you land! Nicely written.
Cheers, FT

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Nini

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and thank you for the encouragement!
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9 Years Ago

No problem! I love reading the work of "new" writers because it inspires me to read more and to writ.. read more

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I am Nini. There was a time, a very long time ago, when the words came easy to me. Writing was like breathing. There was never a question of "how" to do it, I just did it. After what seems like a .. more..

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