YOU LEFT

YOU LEFT

A Poem by Shah Sabia
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But why ?

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You said you'd be there,
Always, forever, till the end.
But you left,
You left,
When i needed you the most.
You said you'd stay,
Even if i wanted you to leave.
But you left,
You left,
When i didnt even want you to.

You said you'd never leave,
But you left.
You left,
All of a sudden.
Leaving behind,
All what WE felt.
Destroying "US"
You just left.

© 2015 Shah Sabia


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Shah Sabia
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Ah... The pain we feel when a loved one leaves, whether it be that they simply walk away, or worse they die... It always hurts. Nicely put to words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shah Sabia

9 Years Ago

Well said.
And thankyou for the review :)
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Sure thing. :)

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Shah Sabia
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