YOU

Wind was blowing,
Which way i dont know.
Leaves rustling,
The same way they did.
Dogs shouting,
Out of their expected custom.

Unheard words,
Voiceless calls,
Hushed oration,
Sooty emotions,
Shattered hearts.
Your rage, my composure.
Your rage, my tranquility.
Your rage, my tears.

Every single thing,
Clonning the other.
Exception being,
You.
An entirely different you.

Author's Note

Any thoughts ?
Or any improvements maybe ?
I'll be glad for both.

Reviews

[Cat]

Very nice. I like the comparisons. Easy to read.

[Shah Sabia]

Thankyou very much.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Being abused? or just feelin rejected? well written poem. 100 points.

[Shah Sabia]

Feeling out of place, rejected, dejected, left out and what not.
Well, thankyou.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You're welcome. Anythin i can do to help?

[Shah Sabia]

Maybe no.
Just a mood swing, you know ?
It'll be fine in a day or two, maybe again :'D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh...i see. But the poem speaks for itself...and it tells me otherwise. Either way, its your call. I hope you'll be feelin better :)

[Shah Sabia]

Yeah :)
Thankyou so much by the way.
And yeah, good luck for tomorrow :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sure thing. :) and thanks :)

[Shah Sabia]

All my pleasure :)
I was more excited than you. Lol :) :) :) :'P :'D