WHAT IF ?

What if you wake up someday and see me taking my last breath ?
What if you wake up someday to find that our last confabulation was actually my last hurrah ?
What if you wake up someday and find me omitted from this world of messy creatures ?
What if you wake up someday and realise that the headstrong girl is no more ?
What if you wake up someday to experience my dying breath ?
What if ?

Will you miss me ?
Or will you just smile ?

Will you just smile ?
Or will you mourn your heart out ?

Will you mourn your heart out ?
Or will you just be fine with it ?

Will you just be fine with it ?
Or will your heart yearn for mine ?

Will your heart yearn for mine ?
Or will you be glad to be finally free ?

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, umm... We don't wanna see that day... I for one, do not wanna see that day. But...i see this is kinda like written for someone close to you, or someone you are in a relationship with...or you were...maybe family? (Thats just my guess, so don't take my head off, if i am wrong... lol) yeah, well, i can relate in a way...i wondered the same things about my family. Would they miss me, or would they be happy that i am gone. As for my case, the later would be true, they would be happy...atleast thats what i see from how they treat me. Anyways, i love this poem. Don't get me wrong, i am not enjoying that you feel like this...(that is, if you do, if you don't, then i'm sorry for half an essay...lol) awesome work, i will rate this 100 points.

[Shah Sabia]

Woah calm :p
Well yes, i wrote it for someone who is close to me. You are right there ;)
read moreWoah calm :p
Well yes, i wrote it for someone who is close to me. You are right there ;)
Next up is a heartfelt thankyou, thankyou for the read and the "half essay review" and the rating too :'D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome

[Mufeen]

We don't want to see that day...

[Shah Sabia]

Thankyou for the read :)8

[Mufeen]

Abh aadat daal lo comments ki..."thank you" bolna chod do ! :)

[Shah Sabia]

Haha yeah actually, phir kya comment karun magar wapas ? :p

[Mufeen]

Kch bhi Jo meko achaa lagey :p