crushland

crushland

A Poem by Emily
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this is a song writen by me and one of my best friends sammy

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In the summertime
i have a land
all my own
deep in my heart
 
crushland
dont think anymore (with)
crushland
where the boyz can roam
but no one said
you had to come back down
to earth (crushland)
 
i saw you lookin over at me
but you couldnt move your feet
so you just sat there starin
till you couldnt stare anymore
 
crushland
dont think anymore with
crush;and wher the
boyz can roam
but no one said you had
to come back down to  earth
crushand
 
summer dayz
go by so fast
when your in a world
thats all your own
 
crushland farwell
to crushland where the boyz
can rom but no one
said it had to close back down
crushland
 
im gonna miss crushland
 

© 2009 Emily


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wow everytbody on this website is soooooooo nice thxxxx verybody

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a very well written song. I think it would work well being placed to music. We all have these wonderful places that just seem to not last as long as we would like them to. You and your friend did a great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow thx me and my friend always have dreamt about becoming famous singers and being known for wirting our own songs

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww its so bittersweet...
You have this placething that's all your own but it never last forever...
You have to say goodbye... Crushland... I like it...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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