Wanting you

A Poem by Emily

This poem is more of a song but its is about a girl who likes a boy but he doesn't like her but she wants him to

I see your face

can't help but stare

your pretty eyes

meet my glare

But you don't know

how i feel

what i'm hiding

behind this face

I want you

to want me

Take me to that place

Where i want you

you want me

together we'll find our way

Int his world

I hear your voice

Like a sweet melody

i'm drifting off to a world

where you want me

because its hard to talk

when im around you

nothing compares to the time

spent with you.

I want you

to want me

Take me to that place

Where i want you

you want me

together we'll find our way

Int his world

I still remeber that one day

you came up to me

with a big smile on your face

and told me about her

Even though she doesn't care about you

i still will

and when you find out

i'll always be here

Because i'll always

Want you

to want me

to take me to that place

where i want you

you want me

maybe someday

you'll find your way

back to me

© 2009 Emily

Author's Note

Ok now its finished fyi it is a song so tell me what you think

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Hannah Monttkomepy

I thought this was good. I don't really know why you put int instead of in, at first I thought it was a typeo but then you wrote it again. Also there was another typeo, you put remeber instead of remember. But onto my review for the song.

The song didn't have much meat to it. Now that's also the case with a lot of songs today but if you listen to the older songs, like by Aretha and Peggy Lee and Whitney, all their songs have a lot of meat in 'em, which makes the songs a lot more interesting when you don't hear the music, you just see the words.
Very nice idea though. Some of it didn't flow but if you put it to music, then the music can make it flow.

Great Job! =D