Confession

And your eyes,

The desert of sole sincerity,

The field for my solitude,

The sea for my meditation,

The beach for the ship of

My awaiting 

 

Simple,

Not sophisticated,

Life is,

The interpreter is not wise

To go through the maze

Enough for my peace,

For my greed,

A library, a sofa

And a coffee maker are,

When your presence

Perfumes the atmosphere

Not obvious, 

nor predictable it is,

It is the vivid emotion,

Like a roaming electron,

But still it is 

Hanging around a nucleon,

Isn't that enough?

Lustful? Selfish?

I don't think so

The pigeon needs kindness,

Not to be taken care of,

Only if they knew

Let's write upon the sands

Upon the clouds,

On the soil,

On the notebook of the waves,

Join me on painting it,

Through the brush of a hurricane:

In the depth of a mirror,

He is,

God himself,

Yet, waiting for the lovers' wind

To bring him the perfume

Of the genuine love of ours

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

This truly dances around and across its depth, its sense and its wonderful structure. It is to sum up in a word beautiful.

[Nima.Hope]

Thank you for your words, I sincerely appreciate it,
Best wishes
Nima

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful and contemplative reflection on love and the power of emotion. The use of metaphor and imagery is particularly effective, with the eyes described as a "desert of sole sincerity" and a "sea for my meditation." The idea of simplicity and the importance of presence is emphasized throughout, with the library, sofa, and coffee maker serving as symbols of comfort and contentment. The speaker's desire for genuine love is palpable and the final lines are a beautiful tribute to the transformative power of love. Overall, your poem is a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to love and the human experience.

[Nima.Hope]

Wow Bhuyanshi my friend, you did a big favor to me by giving me this perfect reviews. My gratitude towards you is beyond words. Thanks again❤️

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Nima... a Ship of dreams is in the Eyes of the believer...
The Horizon holds many adventures. Your poetry is warm and winsome.
tenderly, Pat

[Nima.Hope]

My dear Pat, it's always a blessing to read a review of yours. I'm thankful beyond my words.
Always wishing you and your dear family the best🤍

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Nima, your chosen words are brimful of beautiful poetic expression. Your opening stanza a treat to read. Love is everything in a world destroying itself with conflict. Have a wonderful Wednesday my young friend.

Chris

[Nima.Hope]

Dear Chris, I'm cheerful you liked this poem, my gratitude is beyond words ma'am. Always wishing you the best:)

[emmajoygreen]

Your final stanza says it all, beauty and logic yoked, love and testament held dear. This too is a pattern of words to treasure,

'Enough for my peace,
For my greed,
A library, a sofa
And a coffee maker are,
When your presence
Perfumes the atmosphere '

Your phrasing mixes the old and the new so comfortably. Many thanks for sharing.. ..

[Nima.Hope]

Than you dear Emma, I appreciate your review so much because among 29 views, you were so kind to give me a review. Many thank s for your your kind words❤️

[emmajoygreen]

People will come in droves once they know you are here to share words and gentle friendship. You are more than welcome.