Right and Wrong

Right and Wrong

A Poem by Nikoli
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just read it

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What is Right?

What is Wrong?

Who decides which is which?

If somone says something is Wrong, but another says it's Right, who do I believe?

In the end, Right and Wrong do not exist.

Right and Wrong are just words, nothing more.

We choose our own actions, regardless of morality.

Is this how it should be?

I don't know, nor do I care.

© 2009 Nikoli


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I'm not sure whether I like this or not, I mean it's all well said but it does feel more like a rambling poem rather than a poem. Perhaps (in my opinion) if you change the structure the whole 'poem' idea would be more effective. Otherwise, it's a good write and I agree, the kitty was just a cute touch haha

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree!!! Well said! And the kitty kat was a nice touch!!! Very good concept on the way life works! Short and to the point, but very good!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


so true.... well said, and well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it! :) I read it cause there was a kitty. :) hehe.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2009

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I'm an inexperienced writer trying to succeed. I love writing stories. I write fantasies, romances, comedies, and psychological thrillers. I've written two books and I'm trying to get the first one pu.. more..

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