Tears

My feelings about life rn

I close my eyes hoping noone has noticed how close I am to tears 

I do my best to keep these emotions in, because If I dont I fall apart 

And I never know when the hole inside my chest  is going to go away 

Theirs so many bad thoughts in my head telling me to break down

Telling me I'm not enough

My tears are the river of emotions I've held in for so long 

Feeling like noone will ever understand  the pain I go through almost everyday

Understand that I didn't choose the cards I was dealt 

I just choose to do something  different  and hope one day i can make a difference  in the world  with my tears of pain 

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

The poem does a good job of expressing feelings. However, you might want to use "There are" in the opening of line 4.