Kaila

When best friends leave

Because I loved to much, and I dived to deep.
And I don't know how to let her go.
But I need to remember she hurt me.
But now I'm the one who control's it from here.
No matter how much pain I'm in.
I can't go out their selling myself to people who don't really care.
I need to value myself as more.
Even though she used me lots.
I must say I miss her, and it will never go away.
But when does it ever.
I don't think it ever will.
I need to stop thinking that I'll see her again, and she will remember me.
Even though I bet she will.
But still I need to remember things went wrong in our relationship, and she's just fine.
She's in a better place where she's safe.
I hope she knows I think of her night and day.
Everything reminds me of you.
And that's just fine.
And I need to find a better coping than crying.
I love you lots.
But I have replaced you.
It's for the best for both of us.
-Ivy Thomas

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

"Everything reminds me of you.
And that's just fine.
And I need to find a better coping than crying.
I love you lots."
This part of your poem, to me is very deep and heart felt. I really enjoy reading your writing. Even though this is a hard topic, I see hope in the end that it'll eventually get better.
Your poems are so heartfelt and amazing!
Please continue to write!

Your Friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ivy you are an incredibly gifted poet. Your poems touch my heart. This is so honest and raw-just amazingly beautuful. The world needs to hear your voice. Keep writing!