success

working hard and falling down should not let you feel sad...keep working hard!!

Its not too late,
so GO, Run Reach and Open the gate,
Enter it and hold the glorious knife,
and cut the victorious cake of your life,
Go and start walking on the success' ladder,
and don't stop until life shatters,
It doesn't matter if you fall again and again,
and starting from beginning brings no shame,
What matters if you don't have money,
word hard and surely your tomorrow will be sunny,
But only when, you keep your steps moving ahead on that way,
people watching you might say,
He/she fell that day, on the same way,
but today she still shines like a hay,
Remember one thing,
always treat yourself like a Queen or a King,
Who even after hearing to the praises never gets snob,
and never let his people sob,
Life's too short to open the success' knot,
no matter what, you keep trying hard,
coz to get back the kingdom, even the richest king once fought,
Saying is easy, easier is to believe,
and easiest is to sit and grieve,

Choice is yours, make plans, implement and strive to achieve,
 or let the most precious gems within you pass through the life's sieve..

Author's Note

being a simple man/woman is the easiest task of our life,
but there is no job better than trying hard to be different from others. one should never stop making efforts for being different, because being different from others is being YOU.!!

Reviews

[lavina k.]

You truly said that it is our choice to make life or to break life....of someone's or ours....it truly depends on us....that how we make choices and take our life to a new successful n leading path...!!!!!
Truly Smiling piece!!!!!!
:)

[NIKITA BHARDWAJ]

Thank you for reviewing the poem and giving beautiful reviews.

[GTVile]

Yeah, I must say that you add a new perspective to individuality that I've never seen before. You touch on something that people usually just tell to kids, but you seem to deliver it to an adult audience here, which is a breath of fresh air. Its kind of rare to see adults praising individuality in other adults, and perhaps that is what the world needs more of.

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Being YOU=i love the way individuality is portrayed throughout this piece!!!
(Great Poetry!)