Beauty and Grace

I wrote this about 4 years ago. Found it today. Interesting display of progression.

 

Darkness through the sky 

With a moon so white

Graceful cries

I want to die

Hold it in

In spite

Of Jane

Graceful cries

I want to die

Pull it up

To take a breath

Brazen smiles

Entice the theft

All alone

For scrutiny

The little girls

Priority

Graceful cries

I want to die

 

Beauty emerges

The day is saved

Where she steps

Gold is paved

Delicate blushed cheeks

Contrast the cold

For perfection

She is the mold

Beauty cries

I want to die

Love is a lie

Its not about

The inside

Realization

Then a sigh

Beauty cries

I want to die

Time moves slow

Dragging

When you want to go

Time moves fast

Creating today

As the past

Beauty cries

I want to last

Reviews

[Kaotic Barbie]

beautiful :-)

This is a great example of imagery that is very vivid! I liked the darkness and then beauty comes to the rescue. It is almost like a fairytale! Great work!

[Brandon]

Nicely written. Good job.