STUPID

Stupid heart and stupid emotions

How could i have been so stupid as to nearly let myself fall...

Let you get closer to me but not notice that it was only a game to you...

I was nothing more than fun, something to play with and then throw away...

When i thought you were looking at me it turns out that you were looking past me at someone else...

I let you in and you make a pass to grab at my heart but all to quickly i see that you dont even know what you are doing to me...

Sitting there in your own ignorance thinking nothing of it and all the while twisted thorns grow around my heart piercing it and chaining me up like some kind of slave...

 

Then we parted and i was still unsure, you still had a grip but the thorns had loosened...

I saw you with them behind my back not even knowing that you were conspiring against me...

So i took a torch and burnt the thorns away...

I stole my heart back and bound it in a box with my emotions and buried them in the sea..

 

For i will never let anyone get to me...

 

Reviews

[Aifey Jayd]

On the fifth line I think grap is supposed to be grab, but other than that, this is awesome. It's sad, but an amazing piece. I think the way you broke up the stanzas was really interesting, and it's refreshing to see a poem with longer lines. This was good. :) Keep writing!

[Kaylor Mason]

In my experience, the real problems start when you forget where you threw the box, and you can't find your heart anymore

[A Risen Heroine.]

I really like this poem, I can relate...
Good work and thanks for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~