A little Cut

It was fun being with you. Just the two of us, bright and dark, light and mixed. We talked about everything until things got darker and we started talking about that. Then the bottles fell and the glass shattered on the floor and spread until it came pouring out of the plastic bag. Pieces of glass glinting, hinting at us until we gave in. I gave into my curiosity and she gave into her need. The craving that she deeply desires. I wouldnt have done it had i had a straight head but my head was unclear, a turbulent storm running through my mind. Then we delicately drew lines, marking our bodies pushing harder daring each other to see how far we could go. We stopped because we thought it didnt work but it hid itself until the morning after. Proudly darkening my skin with its presence, constantly reminding me of how much i hate myself. Everytime i feel under a stress that i cant escape i go back to it, like an addict. But its only been 3 times so far and i wont let it get any further.

 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

wonderful picture, really nice title... hmm i think you meant to maybe write done instead of "dont" in this line here:
" I wouldnt have dont it had i had a straight head but my head was unclear"
some missing apostrophes too but o well,
unless your looking to correct those too...
and in this line i think another miss type/ spelling error, umm itself; you wrote "itslef":
"We stopped because we thought it didnt work but it hid itslef until the morning after."
... those were all i seen... this was really great tho, powerful and sad, but feeling and hurt as well... i liked this. :)