Dare to care

This is really just experimental. But reveiws would be good :)

Do you dare, to even care?

Will you listen to this prayer, or

just turn your head like all the others.

Will you shun me or hug me?

Dont leave me.

Dont defeat me.

 

Do you dare, to even care?

If I fail this mission will you

continue it? For me?

When I cannot speak or help?

Will you leave me?

Will you deceive me?

 

Do you dare, to even care?

When you visit the place where

I rest, permenantly at peace.

Or will you act like I was nothing?

Would you leave me?

Would you?

Would you dare to care?

 

Reviews

[?]

Such an intense piece...the repetition in this one works well.
Im a hugger so guess I would hug you...:)

[reflectingus]

Wow, this is pretty intense. I love how you keep questioning, and insecurities is what we all have, so I can really relate to your poem. Strong words, strong meanings, great job! :)

[Vin]

I really love this ^.^ soooo good!!!
The repetition of "Do you dare, to even care?" is awesome xD
Well done, I looove it!

-Ducky (LOL)