"Shortcuts"

"Shortcuts"

A Chapter by RaynesMelody

Lewis

I was being watched. There was no mistaking that alarming, prickling feeling on the back of my neck. Someone was following me.

I walked down the gloomy alleyway, mentally cursing myself for taking the “shortcut” earlier. Sure it was faster, but it was definitely not safer. I turned the corner only to find a dead end. Damn! I must have taken a wrong turn somewhere. I shook my head. My sense of direction was seriously lacking. I studied the wall in front of me and was just considering jumping it when I heard him.

He wasn’t that hard not to hear really. Muttering and wheezing away like an old man. I bit my lip, thinking. Maybe he was just a doddery sod, who thought that I had money or something valuable. I laughed quietly to myself as I pictured a befuddled old geezer thinking that he had found his long lost granddaughter. I smiled and began to turn around.

And that’s when I heard the scream.



© 2010 RaynesMelody


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A short chapter. I like the thoughts and the reaction at the end of this chapter. To know someone is near and allowing the mind to wander and ponder the next action. A excellent chapter.
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RaynesMelody
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"If it were not for hopes, the heart would break." I'm not one for spoken words... but when written, or sung... I can never seem to shut up. more..

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