In Her Eyes

I can see the sadness in her eyes

The kind that time creates

Evidence of the pain she feels

Proof her poor heart aches

I can see the loneliness in her eyes

Reflections of the world she's known

A life that never felt complete

A mind too often alone

I can see the despair in her eyes

She fears it's now too late

Her dreams are all just memories

Her empty soul awaits its fate

I can see the emptiness in her eyes.....every time I look in the mirror

Reviews

[kat00888]

The last line is truly breath taking. I love it. Its a work of art.

[Nicole715]

Thank you very much.

[Sean Cairns]

I love the big reveal at the end, it's something I've wanted to work with before. Perfectly dark and very relatable to me.

[Nicole715]

Thank you :-)