Love.

Love.

A Poem by Zoli Fern
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A Six-Word Story

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Eyes flicker awake.
Smiling.
"My Love."

© 2016 Zoli Fern


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I understand its supposed to be short yet it feels.. like something is missing. I however do like the piece yet its just a tad to leaving if you are going to write something short try using more powerful words to say all that you want. though good work just needs tweaking

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful thoughts in expressions of love;-]


Posted 8 Years Ago


A powerful poem. Title says it all.

Intriguing...who is smiling?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Zoli Fern

8 Years Ago

Well, it's all up for debate and interpretation, but I was imagining it was the speaker... But who .. read more
A moment, a sentiment, a story. Well done, not an easy task :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it Zoli! It is a talent to do this for sure. I am way too wordy to accomplish the feat of a six word story, but you pulled it off. It makes me have memories of happy times in the beginning of love. Nicely done...
...Misty

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Zoli Fern
Zoli Fern

Marquette, MI



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