I understand its supposed to be short yet it feels.. like something is missing. I however do like the piece yet its just a tad to leaving if you are going to write something short try using more powerful words to say all that you want. though good work just needs tweaking
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I like it Zoli! It is a talent to do this for sure. I am way too wordy to accomplish the feat of a six word story, but you pulled it off. It makes me have memories of happy times in the beginning of love. Nicely done...
...Misty
I started writing stories years ago, and I haven't been able to stop since. I'm always looking for ways to improve my craft, and learning from how others write.
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