Black

Black

A Poem by Surface_Cracks

Black.
It’s not a cry.
It’s not an excuse.
It’s not a curse.
How dare you think such?
Can’t I love the color of my skin without you questioning me?
God made me.
The Scientist made me from a figment in which you couldn’t even imagine.
Your mind sits in blackness
The Earth is encompassed in blackness
Yet, you don’t understand.
Take back the misconception
For I am more than a color, more than a pigment
More than a neutral, more than a delinquent
I am more than your stereotype, I am truly brilliant
An original essence of the universe, that’s what I am.
Your babies are grown in blackness
Your best images are developed in blackness
Yet
You don’t understand.

© 2013 Surface_Cracks


Author's Note

Surface_Cracks
Just be honest :)

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Honestly, I like it. Good first piece. My favorite line is "The Scientist made me from a figment in which you couldn’t even imagine." This line reminds me of Elijah and the 24 Scientist and all of the nations teachings lol.

This piece is very positive and uplifting. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surface_Cracks

11 Years Ago

Lol, I'm part of the Nation of Islam!
Those Teachings definitely fueled this piece.
Than.. read more
Malcolmveli

11 Years Ago

lol you're welcome. the scientist gave you away



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your confidence in yourself is justified... look forward to reading more pieces from you...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surface_Cracks

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
i love it! We are much more than a Stereotype.
Bravo!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surface_Cracks

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much !
Honestly, I like it. Good first piece. My favorite line is "The Scientist made me from a figment in which you couldn’t even imagine." This line reminds me of Elijah and the 24 Scientist and all of the nations teachings lol.

This piece is very positive and uplifting. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surface_Cracks

11 Years Ago

Lol, I'm part of the Nation of Islam!
Those Teachings definitely fueled this piece.
Than.. read more
Malcolmveli

11 Years Ago

lol you're welcome. the scientist gave you away

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Surface_Cracks
Surface_Cracks

Miami, FL



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I'm Young. I'm Gifted. And I'm a Writer. I've been one ever since I can remember and now, it's getting to the point where I HAVE to carry my laptop or my notebook. I just want to get better at it .. more..