Breadths Away

Am I being too... stern with him?
Staring with unsmiling eyes
Keeping myself composed, suppressing
My feelings and telling him countless lies
But these feelings that we feel,
Deep inside, and overflowing with compassion
Turning what we want into what could be real
Making dreams into scenes of absolution

His eyes meet mine
And I think for a moment;
What if our lives were to... entwine?
My emotions become urgent

Together;
Always.
Forever
Breadths Away.

Author's Note

I wrote this one in class a long time ago.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem has a natural flow to it. It feels as if it popped into your mind and you had to write it down. The poem makes me feel like you have a lover that is far away and wish for a real relationship to start. Great job of portraying heart felt emotions.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Beautiful imagery and a sneaky interrogation of vice, I find it soothing rather than deliberativeness. well done, a well though out prose.

[Lorraine]

Sweet and touching. The honesty and uncertainty of its poem gave strength to this poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[loves2write91]

I like this I can relate to this Been there before good poem