I Have None Left

A poem I wrote from the perspective of someone who didn't want to cope with life anymore, and had nothing left.

The world went dark when you disappeared..

Of everything I held near,

 You were everything I held dear.

Life crashes into us like deadly waves;

 A ripcurrent with zero saves.

And now my memory, it fades.

 I've always walked along that darkened path,

Never knowing it's aftermath.

 So sheltered from all, yet I know the pain,

My demons inside, I've never slain.

 The blood it drips from my fingertips...

My vision is blurry, Death is in no hurry.

 I don't need a savior,

I condone this behavior.

 A once clean razor, now tainted with blood,

Yet there are no tears, my eyes do not flood.

 I welcome it all with one final breath...

Of all my cares, I have none left

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

Creativity and Creative Visualization is present everywhere in this.
and .. strong similes and idols...

there are demons within everyone...and it's very difficult to slain them..
It's simply superb..

[Nightingale Silva]

Thank you for reviewing my material. I have so much passion when it comes to my writing. I take great pride in it.