"Left With Nothing, Die With Everything"

Just a poem...I wrote this a long while ago...

Lost my thoughts a long time ago..

Left with nothing...

Die with everything...

I tried to save a lost friend..

I tried in vain...

In the end...

My heart was slain..

I'm drowning in my own tears, 

Confessing my sins to you...

But does it do any good?

I'm only good to fade away again...

I've been looking for  myself

Forever and a day now...

I don't know where else to turn..

I lost all love a long time ago..

Like the petals of a withered flower,

My heart falls apart...

I've sang my sorrow...

And severed my 'morrow....

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

I too feel the same thing ...
I am drowning from my own tears..

"Like the petals of a withered flower,
My heart falls apart..."-----> it's sssssoooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful.....

[Nightingale Silva]

Thank you. I ended up turning this one into a short poem. It was originally meant to be the beginning verse of a song, but I had no one to help me put music to it.